Editing Others Posts

Here are some paragraphs written by other of my fellow students and edited by me.

• With a great attitude Arsenal has defeated the Blue Dragons with a five to zero score. Although Garcia and Guarin tried their best on court they couldn't break the defense done by Arsen Wenger. This has caused the Portuguese team an elimination and a very small possibility of winning the league, this has totally shown that it has been the worst season for the three times winner of the Champions League. Even though Falcao is now becoming one of the best players of the team and even with Garcia they couldn't defeat Arsenal.
• I am probably Anderson´s biggest fan. His last fight wasn't the most interesting match or a close match. actually Silva was showing all of his knowledge in various martial arts such as Tae Kwon Do, Capoeira and Muay Thai. In the first round Anderson did some great kicks and punches. In the second round Anderson did as in the first round but in my opinion he started getting a little cocky, mocking and insulting during the fight. In the third round the beginning was like the rest of the rounds but, it all started changing in the half way point of the round where Silva went form an offense to a defense position.
• News: The celebrity couple Nick Jonas and Selena Gomez have ended their relationship. This happened three or four weeks ago , there are still no rumors of what has happened but, some sources say Selena is no longer following him on Twitter. On the other hand Joe Jonas and Demi are very well established and Kevin Jonas is happily married.
• Buenas Tardes Followers or Good evening followers. This has been a wonderful day and it´s also a wonderful day to do a fashion police. A fashion police for Jennifer Aniston.